Update

We have now complete all of our filming and we are now beginning to edit the scenes and piece them together. Beginning to do this has now showed us the problem that our original script draft is too long and we need to cut it down to allow the sound effects, music and voice over all to be heard. We are aiming the voice over to last around 30 seconds so its long enough to make the audience become enticed but no so long that the story line becomes confusing and the viewers loose interest.

New Script:

Charlie: Someone once said, "The tragedy of life is not that it ends so soon, but that we wait so long to begin it.". However, i like to think life is just the beginning, death must be so great, because no one has came back to tell me differently.. 

*music begins in the background* 

36 days, 5 hours, and almost 27 minutes. 

You, me, your world, my world, all changed by that split moment. 

*noise of car crashing* 

.. I remember that time we went to the park, it was a park we came across by accident. It was so beautiful. She were so happy and playful, so at ease with everything. *echoes laugh* I thought I knew at that moment, she'd always bring happiness to my life.
*doors slam*
That night i lied to the police, I confessed to a crime someone else did, someone I made a vow to love and protect. Did i make a mistake, a mistake decided in a moment, a mistake that cant be undone, a mistake perhaps so insignificant as it wont bring back the life of an innocent child.  
*sound of ambulance*
What is someone suppose to do when the person they protect doesn't protect them, the person who moves on in a matter of weeks, and betrays the love use once had together.. nothing but manipulation. 
*sounds of handcuffs* 

all my love, charlie